Croonford Detectives Case 39: Prom Wrecker

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author’s Note: It is early for Prom to be held by some UK schools but I just feel this story is appropriate. Here, I’m correcting what I wrote about SMS spoofing previously although I still could be incorrect.

 

“Prom?!” A Year 11 student exclaimed.as he read the WhatsApp message the student council sent to all Year 11 students. Many students were in a new eatery offering discount meals for school students. “Oh yes! Prom and it says ‘competition for Prom Queen’, I’m so going win,” Lin looked up from her Laksa Lemak.

 

“Hey, Miss Chan, you don’t own the Prom Queen position. I’m claiming the accolade as I’m also clever and stunning,” Heather Smiths responded, her cleavage visible from her sleeveless top.

 

“Hey you two, my artistic talent also counts. Boobs aren’t the only part of beauty,” Harriet Coy called.

 

“I’m in the contest as well, watch out,” Chelle called from the other end of the table.

 

“Why not choose me? A BAME girl as opposed to the nom,” Julia Humes, one of the few black students called over a fish tagine.

 

Jenn’s classmates were also discussing the Prom Queen competition. “They want a Queen. Well, I debate, act and am and Welsh,” Bethan Morgan remarked to her plate of Faggots and mash.

 

“I’ll try my luck,” Madeleine Ranson threw herself in the ring.

 

“I’ll have to get into proper shape then compete,” Molly Peacock remarked. She was remanded in a young Offender Institution for aiding attempted murder of Jenn and Lin.

 

Other Year 11 girls joined in the discussion, or rather the ‘battle to be the school’s next Prom Queen.’ Jenn just sat listening to girls wishing to be Prom Queen. She never wished to participate especially now she had relationship problem. Male students also started also stated saying they wished to be Prom King. Art Morton was one of the first to declare, but hardly anyone like a former school bully to claim that award. Mark Cavendish, Chelle’s boyfriend, wanted the title, though he silently didn’t think he would pass the quiz portion. Reinhard and Richard also stated their intention to enter the race.

 

Bethan and Molly caught up with Jenn and asked why she fell silent. “You’re afraid of wearing a gown for prom like you were at Maddie’s housewarming?” Bethan wondered.

 

“That and an almost broken relationship,” Jenn added, trying not look at Richard.

 

“You two were arguing over a music quiz and who will be the school’s top GCSE student. I’m sure that can easily be worked out,” Molly added.

 

“I’ll be worse for me girls, I’ll be having my period that evening,” Bethan remarked.

 

Suddenly, Jenn’s phone buzzed and as she excused herself, Lin’s and Chelle’s phones also buzzed. :”Oh, gosh!” Chelle exclaimed. The text message read: Watch out girls! I’m going to ruin your Prom! It was signed with a cat emoji.

 

Shifting out of the eatery, the girls shouted together, “The Cat!” Lin furiously replied but instead received a message that the number was no longer in use. Chelle rushed up to the three boys but none of them received that message. The six teen detectives hastily congregated at their headquarters with Reinhard the first to speak up. “The Cat is either using a prepaid SIM card which can be bought at a cheap price and thrown away,” he remarked. “Or he or she is spoofing, like the Cat did previously. If it’s spoofing, it’s way more advanced using for example, Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP).”

 

“How did she, the probability this foe is female, get our phone numbers? Most of us changed our numbers in the last year or so. Also, why message just us girls?”

 

The six of them brainstormed but couldn’t think of any answers. They decided to head home with Lin and Reinhard staying to add more security features to their hideout. As Lin opened a drawer he blurted out, “So, what gown or dress will you be wearing to prom?”

 

She smiled in response.

 

“Is it purple?”

 

Lin smiled again.

 

“Strapless? Ankle-length?”

 

Lin simply smiled again.

 

“Oh, you’re keeping me in suspense.”

 

“You’ll find out soon. Let’s get to work.” After receiving permission from the caravan owner, Mr Morden, they changed the front door lock from a key lock to a digital type that Lin bought before. The CCTV was modified so that what was filmed could be viewed on their mobile phones and Lin’s digital watch.

 

“Hey, why that bucket for?” He asked before as she balanced a bucket near the top of the caravan’s door.

 

“Old school trap. If someone tries to force their way into here, the bucket will fall on them. I plan to fill it with liquid that’s hard to remove. We all just have to be careful when we open the door.”

 

“Clever. I’m going to play an online game against that ex-criminal Harv and if I win, he’ll soupy us with information regarding this number. Want to watch me?” Reinhard asked.

 

Mark walked Chelle home but as she reached the stairs leading to her room, her sister Kate came rushing to her.

 

“I just returned from my choir practice and heard a commotion. Two figures were crawling out of your room window. I chased after them but they managed to escaped over the fence. Their black shirts had a minute cat symbol on their sleeves.”

 

Chelle rushed into her room nearly shouting upon seeing everything strewn all over the place. The police came, however the detective was neither DCI Nikki Heath nor DS Bluebell Ransom. “Well Miss, thankfully nothing is stolen. We’ll keep looking.” DI Hugh Smith announced and left.

 

You won’t catch me, a new text message appeared on her phone and the number was engaged when called.

 

“That was a nice Age of Empire’s game, mate. I’m a legitimate business shop owner though, not sure I can help you,” Harv said. “Oh, hi darlin’.” He puffed his cigarette but the smoke blew away from Lin.

 

The East Asian show the text messages and they want they wished to know.

 

“Ah, SMS or text message spoofing. It’s prevalent in the criminal world and from any major company. This manipulation of sender information is achieved through the use of specialized software or online services that allow users to alter the sender’s phone number or alphanumeric sender ID. You’re looking at some great apps and some easily accessible websites. Or, someone uses Signaling System ‘7, a set of telephony signalling protocols. to send a message through the roaming network to the Short Message Service Centre (SMSC) They fake the original number and it can be sent to a recipient with an SMS agreement with the victim’s operator unknowingly. Yes, you could use prepaid SIM cards if you have the budget for it. VOIP and Orange Box are more for spoofing calls.”

 

“I have stated the wrong information previously,” Lin and Reinhard said simultaneously.

 

“It’s easy to mix up and some spoofing isn’t illegal in some cases perhaps if mass spoofing from the same weird number.”

 

As those science-centric teen detectives thought how to find the source these text messages, Jenn was in deep thought over her last argument with Richard and the impending challenge of wearing an evening gown. Ok, so I lost a music quiz against him and he thinks he’ll be first in the GCSEs not me. Is it really my fault in starting the argument? Jenn kept this question until a WhatsApp appeared on her phone screen. Initially it was another threatening message from the Cat, she ignored it. It was Bethan, wondering if she would like to join her and Molly for shopping for gowns. I guess I’ve to face this fear, she thought.

 

Reinhard went over to Chelle’s place and swept her room with portable forensic kit but found no fingerprints or footprints. “Wow, they so sneaky,” he commented, with Chelle giving a glum look in response to the dead end.

 

Chelle went out, despite Reinhard’s warning to walk close with someone else. She did walk where there were many passersby’s when suddenly, she heard several muted cries. It came from a set of thorny bushes and after several scratches, she saw a leaf-covered sleeping bag and when unzipping it, she found Cara Owen, the school co-president tightly restrained, gagged and blindfolded.

 

“Two leather suit figures pounced on me as I carried decorations for your prom. Now I’ve too purchase those which they damaged.” Chelle saw torn banners next to her. “You lot looking chasing after them? Get them!” Cara carefully tore away excess duct tape from her dress.

 

Aw, see how I’m ruining your Prom? The message appeared on the girls’ phones.

 

The police were again notified and luckily DS Bluebell Ransom took on the assault and break in incidents. As uniformed Police Constables patrolled the neighbourhoods of the girl detectives, the six of them gathered again.

 

“Based on Cara’s descriptions, it’s most definitely girls around her 1.62m height. I’m sure either or both are students from our school.,” Chelle stated.

 

“That’s some lead but that means hundreds of students and who knows how to spoof and have access to leather suits?” Jenn wondered.

 

With no clear answers, Reinhard again walked Lin home while Mark walked Chelle and Jenn to their homes separately. What an arrogant girl I picked, Richard thought as he headed home also thinking of a formal breakup.

 

 

 

Around seven days before Prom, Jenn met up with Bethan and Molly. “Still not certain on your relationship with Richard?” Bethan asked as the three entered a shopping complex.

 

Jenn just nodded.

 

“Isn’t it simple to rectify? You humbly agree you lost the music quiz, he stops saying he’ll be the first in the GCSE results?” Molly added.

 

Jenn just mumbled ‘perhaps’. The topic changed as they entered a shop specially for Prom dresses. Within ten minutes, Bethan and Molly picked their gowns, Bethan picked a strapless black ankle-length dress with a golden sash, resembling the Flag of Saint David. Molly picked a black Floral Midi Dress.

 

“See any you really like?” Bethan interrupted Jenn’s daydreaming.

 

“Wouldn’t you have a larger challenge changing your sanitary napkins with that dress?” Jenn changed the subject.

 

“I bought period pants - they’ll hold whole evening. Focus and you’ll look like a queen at Proom.”

 

Should I bother to look like a high-class girl? Her friends kept pointing at various dresses and gowns until she chose a sparkling dark blue gown that reached just above her ankles. It had bow-tied straps thick enough to cover her bra straps which Jenn preferred. The store didn’t have any matching her dress size but promised she could pick up one two days before Prom.

 

“Great, next hairdresser,” Bethan announced and managed to persuade Jenn her hair needed styling for the event. As the trio exited, they heard a scream and saw a girl wearing a black hoodie - unusual for the hot summer weather - being chased by a younger girl. Instinctively, Jenn ran after the hooded girl and shaking their heads, Bethan and Molly followed.

 

Jenn lost sight of them as she ran outside but quickly heard the distinctive sounds of someone gagged. In a drainpipe, she found that younger girl trussed up with ropes and gagged over-the-mouth.

 

“That teen wanted to buy fireworks from my dad but she’s underage and stole some from the shelves!” The girl, Sophie, sobbed as Jenn freed her. Her friends caught up and Bethan offered to take her back. “Wait, I’ve seen those knots before; one of the Cat’s colleagues taught me when I was with them,” Molly remarked. Jenn immediately ran to find this perpetrator with Molly following. Just as Molly turned the corner behind the shopping centre, she was violently pushed to the ground. Molly’s arms were forced behind her back and cable ties were secured around her wrists.

 

Just as tape was about to be stuck on her lips, her screams helped. Two hard structs from an umbrella resulted in a grunt and Molly’s attacker clutched her face and fell.

 

“Never bound my friend!” Jenn roared. Molly’s restraints were cut off by Jenn’s trusty penknife and the pair yanked off the assailant’s hoodie and face mask.

 

“Lorna Cheatle!” Molly screamed. “So, you’re the one who got me into the gang.”

“Bitch!” was Lorna’s reply along with a spit which missed the girls who held her down.

 

“So, you’re the Cat!” Jenn shook her classmate but Lorna shook her head violently. A search of Lorna’s pockets revealed her mobile and a plastic Ziplock bag with SIM cards. The phone’s message was the same Jenn received and more draft messages prepared.

 

“How you explain this?” Jenn held the phone up at Lorna who just glared at her.

 

“Miss, we’ll take it from her,” two PCs called, handcuffed Lorna and led her away.

 

“She’ll be spending a long time in a YOI,” Molly meant a Young Offender Institution. Thanks Jenn, this made me feel so much better. Let’s get our hair done.”

 

Lorna was extremely uncooperative during police interviewing. She continuously insisted she wasn’t the Cat. With the identity of their nemesis still unknown, the teens cautiously prepared for prom. Mark found Reinhard working out in the local gym and neared his classmate,

 

“Okay, whenever you want to have that discussion,” Mark said.

 

“What discussion?” Reinhard asked.

 

“No man naturally smells as good as you do when working out,” Mark pointed.

 

The shorter boy placed down the dumbbells. “It’s aftershave. I managed to find a great brand.

 

“Mate, I know you want to impress your girl but I recommend not to overdo it.”

 

“Well, it’s the only item that helps. I can’t find a tux, I’ve not enough money to hire a limo...”

 

Mark told him his parents hired a limo for him and offered to split the cost.

 

The prom evening quickly came and Pearlyn Chan was tying the knots on her daughter’s gown. “Lin Ling, do enjoy yourself but don’t get into any trouble.”

 

“Yes. Mama, I’ll be fine,” Lin thought with Lorna detained the possibility of any tricks would be lower, though her mother also meant otherwise.

 

“Good evening Mrs Chan, evening Lin,” Reinhard could barely control himself upon seeing his girlfriend. Her dark purple floor-length gown was strapless and the front really emphasised her cleavage. The back consisted of a series of criss-cross ted strings securing the gown. This contrasted with his navy-blue suit and tie. Inside the rented limo, Mark was in a tuxedo while Chelle was in an emerald green strapless dress. At the venue, a hotel in south Birmingham, Chelle checked with the student councillors. “Only a small glitch with the PA system but that has been remedied,” Hugh Johnson told her. PCs were patrolling the exterior but Chelle was still uneasy.

 

Hattie Coy was the next to arrive, one of her 3-D art pieces printed on the front of her dark beige dress. Heather Smith was in a maroon gown with halter straps her cleavage also very evident. Julia Humes was one of the few wearing a light-coloured gown, saying brown matched her skin colour. Madeleine Ranson, being thrifty, wore a black strapped gown from a charity store.

 

“Jenn, you made it,” Bethan called as the short girl detective entered and found sanctuary at the table. Her look prompted a query. “Richard’s seating on the other table,” Molly pointed with her head. Relaxing a little, Bethan, still bisexual, introduced her male date, Charlie.

 

The individual students competing for Prom King and Queen entered their names on a tablet and picked up a quiz sheet. Maddy, Art Morton and Chelle decided to sit out while Lin and Heather already received equal number of votes by the first round. As starters were served, Chelle looked across the room trying to guess who was the Cat. She focused on certain girls but none seemed to look like a tormentor. As food continued was served, Jenn was lost in deep thought especially since heavy metal music was playing.

 

“Now, going back in music time, a set of oldies starting from the 1960s,” the DJ announced. Jenn looked up but ignored the announcement. A figure then came into view.

 

“Jenn Thompson, would you like to dance?” Richard asked.

 

She just stared at the table with Bethan mouthing ‘go on’, Molly nodded her head and after taking a sip of water, she nodded.

 

“I shouldn’t have brought the issue of being the top student,” He started.

All I Have to Do Is Dream played. “I’m at fault and was too arrogant. I’m sorry.”

 

“Let’s dance,” he suggested but neither knew dance steps so they just moved randomly. Others songs including Ray Charles’ You Don’t Know Me, Neil Sedaka’s Oh Carrol played. “Treat me like a fool Jenn,” Richard remarked as Elvis’ voice of the ballad written by Leiber and Stoller.

 

She laughed. The switch to 1960s came fast and Brown Eyed Girl was the first played. “Richard, I’m not brown-eyed, ok I’m your girl.”

 

As the Shirelles’ version of Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow played, he held her hands. “Thank you. I will definitely love you tomorrow, in detective work, in debate in studies, you’re not leaving Croonford are you?”

 

She shook her head and joked again over Tell Him by the Exciters with him replying, “I saw her standing there,” creating much laughter.

 

“They do make a perfect couple, don’t they?” Mark commented to Reinhard who nodded. “Let’s grab our ladies and join in.” The next lot of songs were a mix from the soundtracks of Dirty DancingMy Best Friend’s Wedding, and Grease. As Barry White’s You’re the First, the Last, My Everything started, Jenn excused herself and found Bethan in the loo.

 

“Had a great time with your guy on the floor?”

 

Jenn gave an affirmative reply then stopped. “Did you suggest the songs? I know that look.”

 

Her classmate grinned. “Molly and I were discussing how to patch up your relationship and oldies are your weakness. Want to punch me?”

 

Jenn instead hugged her. “You’re a great friend, Miss Wales.” They returned just as dessert was being served and the Prom King and Queen results announced.

Some other male student got second place while there was a thunderous applause for Mark crowned as Prom Kin.

 

“As for Prom Queen, the runners up is Lin Ling Chan while the winner is...Heather Smith!” Cara announced.

 

“It was a nice fight Lin. You’ll win the Year 13 award. You’re an Asian beauty,” Heather hugged her classmate.

 

Mark and Heather were invited to the dance floor and no one could stop the mass rush of students joining in. The song played was the cliche (I’ve Had) The Time of My Life. Heather quickly let Mark dance with his girlfriend, Reinhard was tiptoeing and hugging Lin while Jenn and Richard were cheek-to-cheek.

 

A loud explosion broke but Chelle’s fears ended as confetti and balloons descended from the ceiling. The Year 11s sang Queen’s famous We Are the Champions and the DJ quickly played the song to aid the singing. Amidst the euphoria, part of Lin’s gown came undone, exposing more of her breast. Chelle helped fix the wardrobe malfunction less it drew unwanted attention. Did someone pull off her gown? She couldn’t tell with the singing and mess.

 

Finally, the event ended but Chelle was still on the lookout. Lin was also partly readying some of the gadgets she stored in her handbag. Jenn in contrast, was hugging Richard commenting on his suit and hat. As the six of them walked out, the Cat growled silently aiming to harasses again

 

Michelle, Lin Ling, Jennifer, Mark, Reinhard and Richard will return in ‘Lost in Translation’.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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