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Mordaca
Joined: 24 Apr 2009 Posts: 64
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:03 am Post subject: The Netterton Jewels |
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Well, well... not only you did a fine job but also provided a cliffhanger to a future (there is going to be one right?) story of La Cioccolata because of circumstances presents in a previous story!
WOW!!!
Thanks for the reports on the errands of the Netterton Jewels (so far...)!!!!! |
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kppresents
Joined: 24 Apr 2009 Posts: 73
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:28 pm Post subject: Re: The Netterton Jewels |
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Mordaca wrote: | Well, well... not only you did a fine job but also provided a cliffhanger to a future (there is going to be one right?) story of La Cioccolata because of circumstances presents in a previous story!
WOW!!!
Thanks for the reports on the errands of the Netterton Jewels (so far...)!!!!! |
Well now - we're at the halfway point of the main story, setting things up for Coco and her assistant to get to work now.
But, this is the second (and not the last time) I've mentioned the name Foscari in conenction with La Cioccolata - and provided I get permission, that will be cleared up soon... |
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Mordaca
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Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:59 am Post subject: |
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Ok, a small chapter with a cliffhanger ending to make the reader say 'I want more!!!!' loud and clear.
Consider it said!!!! |
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kppresents
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:42 am Post subject: |
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Mordaca wrote: | Ok, a small chapter with a cliffhanger ending to make the reader say 'I want more!!!!' loud and clear.
Consider it said!!!! |
Worry not - Doctor George and I are hard at work on the next stage - and I've even shown him the last paragraph, which is saying something.
He's also editing a proposal I have for the tale that will establish why Venice, and the name Foscari, play a part in the past of La Cioccolata - watch this space... |
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Mordaca
Joined: 24 Apr 2009 Posts: 64
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:43 am Post subject: Thank you!!! |
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Beatiful saga!
Thnks for the story!!! |
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